...'crimp son'? I dunno know if you're going for something there...but it's 'crimson'
these are pretty good lines
'Now mix me a color that nobody knows,
and paint me a country where nobody goes,'

they've got a quality that reminds me of someone else in them...can't think who it is.
You've got some weird things in here, that I don't know if they are mistakes, or if they are on purpose, but that's something to think about.

Myra Cohn Livingston.

Myra Cohn Livingston.