Comments : The Paint Box

  • 16 years ago

    by Gabba Gabba Hey

    ...'crimp son'? I dunno know if you're going for something there...but it's 'crimson'
    these are pretty good lines
    'Now mix me a color that nobody knows,
    and paint me a country where nobody goes,'

    they've got a quality that reminds me of someone else in them...can't think who it is.
    You've got some weird things in here, that I don't know if they are mistakes, or if they are on purpose, but that's something to think about.

  • 16 years ago

    by Gabba Gabba Hey

    Myra Cohn Livingston.

  • 16 years ago

    by Gabba Gabba Hey

    Myra Cohn Livingston.