I thought ya'll did an excellent job considering ya'll worked together on this. Good work! I like it alot! Keep up the good work. I look forward to seeing more of your stuff.

Good work done...

'Your kindness will always radiate in my thankful heart
I know you'd want the best for me and not fall apart
So for you I'll stand stronger than ever before
To carry out your life wishes and do much more.'

^^I loved the ending... mainly because it ended with a positive note... very beautiful...

keep writing...

Its beautiful poem and full of feeling ,i know how its hard as i feel the same rhyme was beautiful and flow nicely,but i love this part:Thinking of you has my heart crying, wishing your were here
Knowing you are afar, your love will forever and always be near
I will cherish the moments we have shared filled with your love
With every moment I'm on my two knees I think of you above

well done 5/5

I believe that this poem is amazing.....there is a lot of emotion and clarity embeded into this. I find it extremely wonderful how the both of can keep such flow within the poem and really coloborate your minds together to maintain this...regardless of spelling and grammar, you touch many hearts and the meaning is more to some than others.

Oh wow, Andrew! It's been awhile since I've commented on one of your poems.. and honestly, I'm really glad I decided to. I enjoyed every single line of this piece. You and Zeenat really outdid yourselves here, sweetie. I actually reread the stanza's to try to find a favorite and I couldn't. I enjoyed every single one equally.

This almost brought me to tears. The pain and loneliness you felt here really came out in this poem. The emotions were all strong and tense. The flow was absolutely amazing and wonderfully flawless. Each line was unique and I could feel the love for this person you were talking to radiating from every one. I think many people who have lost a loved one would be very touched by this piece. I know I was. It's so relatable and not something you see everyday. A perfect opening, middle, and closing. I wish it would never end but it had to. I am so pleased with the outcome though. I can't wait to read more amazing poems like this in the future. Great job, never stop writing. You have such an amazing talent. 5/5 <3 <3 <3 <3

~Kayla~

This was extremely wonderful. You two brought together wonderful different thoughts. The rhyming was amazing and well done. Great flow. Overall, 5/5. :] Awesome poem. Yet sad. Keep writing you two ;)

A pem with depth and strength, good one

Great poem from two very talented writers. I think that both of you did great job with this piece, whole piece is truly heartfelt and filled with emotions that I can deeply relate to which made it even more effective to me. Just one suggestion: I should be capitalized through the piece on some places but other than that, this is really well written. All in all, enjoyable read.

That was so beautifully written. it made me think so much of my mom. you really have amazing talent. I love this poem, 1000000000000/5 :)

Very nice....i like it alot nice format and the way on expressing your feelings

Wow i voted 5 but i wnat there to be more numbers its AMAZING!!!! i'm so speechless now. Keep up the awesome work

Absolutely Amazing!

Wow, i almost started crying while reading this.
you have a gift with words. I feel so much emotion in all your poems.
i relate to this. I know how it feels to have someone you love pass away.
great job.

Very well written. Very sad, I'm sorry.

Wow, this was really great. Thanks for the comment to my own work. Keep up the excellent work.

~The Gertrude

Wow, this was really great. Thanks for the comment to my own work. Keep up the excellent work.

~The Gertrude