Dead Lovers

by Lost and Delirious   Jun 2, 2008


I'm laying on the floor
a puddle of blood around my head,
and a note in my hand, for you.

You walk in and see me,
dead,
with tears rolling down my face.

You burst into tears
and grab my hand
and find the note.

My dearest love,

You know I love you so much
but I can't stand life anymore.
So I . . . I'm so sorry, baby.

Love,
Brittney

You run into the kitchen
grab a knife,
and come back by my side.

You kiss my cold, dead lips,
and join my in the after life.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Yeka

    Dude this is really really sweet love it (^_^) 5/5 I'll add this in my fav. (^_^)

  • 16 years ago

    by Liz

    L-O-V-E it! It is so well written and emotional. Keep it up.

  • 16 years ago

    by CanUKissAwayMyPain

    Wow very sad but very well riten.. keep it up. Nice job..

  • 16 years ago

    by Dutch

    Extremely Despressing.
    But well written.
    Keep writing girl.
    xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Crystal Rose Blooming

    Nicely done, great imagination. Keep it up girl
    However living with someone you love is so much sweeter:)