Wow.
There is so much emotion packed into this poem.
The ending is like a punch, it's deffinetly an awesome ending.

The last two paragraphs,
"There was a note,
Found under her bed.
He had no idea,
All kinds of thoughts,
Flew in his head.

"My boyfriend hits me
But what can I do.."
"And theres this really sweet guy..
I wish he liked me
But he has no clue"."

They just fit together so well. You are really good at writing, keep it up!