Sweet angel

by she   Jun 2, 2008


Sweet angel
Smiles so sweet
Too bad know one can see
Shes trying hard
But just doesn't know HOW to get free

Sweet angel
No longer wants the blade
But simply knows no other way

Sweet angel needs help
She cant do this on her own
So sweet angel begins to beg
please save me from myself

[this angel isnt really sweet, just lost, and doesnt know HOW to stop]

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  • 16 years ago

    by ECILA ice

    A common topic yet i know people can easily picture themselves as the main character of your poem.. although it was common to my site you still manage to bring the right blend of intense emotion and idea.

  • 16 years ago

    by Robert Anthony

    Loved it....5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Silent Voice and Tender Heart

    Wow there is a lot of emotion behind this poem. It was very good. Thank you for sharing!

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    A lot of people are trying to save the angel...

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