Comments : The One Thing That Lasts Forever

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    Meeps!!!! KAYLA!!!! Ack. it's so flurgin adorable. lol. I've been avoiding love poems a lot lately, but this was so sweet and sincere. I loved the stanza about heaven and space and how it can't tear you apart. that's so sweet and just a wonderful thought, that you'll have somebody forever. the only thing is: Kayla Marie, you better invite me to your wedding. *nods* LOL. I love you Kayla and I'm so glad to see you so happy. <3333

  • 16 years ago

    by Crystal Gaze

    'Many say that nothing will ever last,
    Eternal love is impossible for whomever,
    But that's because they don't know us,
    The one thing that lasts forever.'

    ^ Beautifully penned. Touched with such emotions, and confidence within your relationship.
    my favourite of the stanzas.

    Kayla as always this piece was penned talentedly from your blessed pen.
    The emotions where very beautiful...
    He is a lucky guy:)

    5/5
    --Elly.