Nothing to Hurt

by ForbiddenSnowflake   Jun 3, 2008


Why do you look at me like im nothing,
Just an object in your way,
Why do you continue to hurt,
While i sit in the corner and pray.

You treat me like im not worth anything,
Just a piece of dirt on the ground,
Why do i continue to hurt,
Never brave enough to make a sound.

I'll continue this journey on my own,
Using ignorance against the pain,
To finish this feeling of being hurt,
Only strength is what i long to regain.

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  • 16 years ago

    by CrossCut

    There comes a point in everyones life when they feel like this. This poem is laced with feeling and power. Nicely done. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by 2weak2smile

    I think everyone has felt this some time in their life.

    Very well written, 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by David ODonnell

    The last verse is deffinatly my favorite, its so bold and direct. I admire you for this piece of writting.

  • 16 years ago

    by H E Losey

    A deep and emotional message here that is written, apparently, from the heart.
    I think you could work on the metre in the first two stanzas. Perhaps "inner" rather then "only".
    I presume the lower case "i" is to show how insignificant the person feels so I won't.....
    The contractio "I'm" need an appostrophy.

  • 16 years ago

    by Im Not Emo

    Good job with this one, gives a sad and lonely feeling, 5/5

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