Comments : Look me in the eyes, tell me you hate me

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    You are worth the world to me, flaws and all, monique. you're my friend and you MATTER TO ME. <3

  • 16 years ago

    by Tammi

    Wow girl I love this poem and right now it hits home and I love to read all ur poems the all have a sad but true story to tell thanks for sharing them with us keep the poems coming 5/5

    Tammi,

  • 16 years ago

    by ECILA ice

    I know how it feels on how you wanted to have a reason why you need and have to surrender but the fact that there's none doesn't mean you can't let go of the pain.. about the poem, i know you can improve it more by adding more imagination and ideas on the topic.

  • 16 years ago

    by NinjaGirl

    Wow... a very powerful piece of poetry that touched me greatly. a deep meaning held beneath all of the words. fantastic wording. well written

    5/5

    Keep Writing, hun
    As Always,
    ~NinjaGirl~