Comments : Not so true Friend

  • 16 years ago

    by Robert Anthony

    Wow, thats how i felt with this 1 friend, nice job, 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    "I thought you were my friend,
    who would be there till the end.
    I was wrong, you see.
    cuz you talked about me"
    -Change cuz to because, Otherwise you could simply put it in the slang category. :)

    "I guess this is goodbye
    A message before my phone dies
    I thought you were true
    now i wish i never met you"
    -Capitolize i's!

    Overall, nice poem. Of course we all can relate to having a friend who wasn't as great as we thought they were in the first place. 5/5.