An interesting write... loved reading... the idea is so unique and creative...

very well done...

Hey If only i cud b a martian in ur poetic land...

Leave wat was written above.... This was superb as ever...

Gr8 wrk fren...

Keep it up..

best wishz... Karan

This is a poem that pertains very well to life and the mysteries and wonders of the unexplored nice poem ^^

Ur poem is Original..at least to me...ur expressions and the way u wrote it were so gorgeous...keep it up5/5

Excellent. Creative and entertaining. Just a few things, The first stanzas abcb rhyme scheme doesn't really work and in the line that says A theory that haunts their night, I would add every right after their. It just helps keep the flow.
But a very good write. 4/5

I had to write a poem about Galileo in 5th grade and this poem just reminded me of that! It was really good; I don't think I've ever read a poem about a planet before. I like the idea, since the solar system fascinates me. Good job!!
5/5

Ok, where to start? There's alot I like about this. ^_^

First off, love the rhyme pattern and how you stuck with it through the whole poem - thats something I have trouble doing when it comes to rhyming poetry. Also, like the subject matter. Mars is an interesting planet and makes for an interesting poem. Astrology has many poetic aspects.

Great work. 5/5

Good word choice and imagery in this piece. The meter is not consistent but it is still a nice piece. I would have classified it under Nature. Great job!!

LR,
Such a unique and interesting choice of topic. You have done the subject well. Intirguing and unique. Wonderful job dear.

Congrats on a well deserving piece :)
~clapping~
Love Cindy

I love this poem mars is my favorite planet

Mars...how redly sweet it is...

Hmm whats martian for flippin excellent!?
a really well though up piece, unique and special =D 5/5

A scientific poem? never thought it would be so well done even when I clicked to read it, great job

your servant:
D. Johnson.

A very interesting and different poem, one step aside from what is common in petry, abcb, nice rhyming.
The talent shows in every line, and the rhytm is excelent.
What does this poem interesting is the difference, the non-triviel genre and it lifts itself on a higher level cause of the fantasy and science that you placed in it, the truth contra the unknown. The red planet will stay in our minds, with martians and all we hear about in the modern society, but will stay in stories until we explore what never been seen before.
Beautyfull work

5 thumbs up

- Mark

Wow this is an interesting poem! never read a poem like this, where it talks about planets...very cool! love the images & details!

take care -n- Keep it up! :D