Comments : Plastic kids & avatars

  • 16 years ago

    by Goodbye

    Seemed like someone just were dissopointed by a lover...

    "I wanted this love,
    but not through a cyberspace,
    you looked always good,
    now your charm has faded."
    => Well, who believes in cyber love? Hmm...it can be in cyber space, with cyber people...I am more down to earth....I need a real guy.

    Nice poem.

  • 16 years ago

    by Gabba Gabba Hey

    'break my ideals,
    and I'll run for the hills,
    should have shared,
    a continent,
    the distance is, too great.'

    this is beautiful, but it confuses the fourty years thing, the distance, and the length of it. The take off our clothes bit (which I might add has a certain...nice quality to it, the way it was worded) maybe there is something I'm missing. All in all this poem is pretty sad, but once again I enjoy your story telling ability.
    Beautifical!