I really admire the emotion in this poem. The feelings are so strong.

Deep down you know your like me,
And you'll grow bitter and old,
Deep inside of me i feel a tear.

Because I am looking at me........

I love this ending. All the hate that boils down one person, yourself. Love it! Great work xx

Wow... this is so powerful, and it so real... well written.

i love it
5/5

xoxo

SOOOOOO great! what a twist! 5/5 from me.

You truly have an amazing way of showing the reader how hurt you are. That poem was so powerful, well done and keep up the good work!!

It's so real! I really like alot... You have an amazing heart..idk..but this poem got to me. Have a great week kim