Is this all there is?

by Gizmo   Jun 3, 2008


I will not let you see my pathetic tears,
i'll wait until you hve left this place then i will
shred them all by myself laying on the kitchen floor.

This is heartbreak, the feeling of sick rising to your mouth,
your chest aching and your eyes weeping over him.
so weak you barely can speak apart from mumbled words,
that only make sense to your own ears.

So, this is all there is to being heartbroke.

funnily, i thought the sky would fall down,
the birds would stop singing,
the world would stop spinning,
everyone would stop grinning.
this planet would fall apart,
just because you didn't love me
anymore.

if i knew this was that heartbreak felt like,
i would have asked you to leave a long time ago,
because it was killing me anyway to know

that you qould be happier with her.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Hollymariee

    Revise this .. It's got alot of silly typo errors . This is also really sad . I can so easily relate to it .. It's rediculous . I have no suggestions really since it's freeverse . Another 5<5 though .

  • 16 years ago

    by Mister 47

    Funnily, i thought the sky would fall down,
    the birds would stop singing,
    the world would stop spinning,
    everyone would stop grinning.
    this planet would fall apart,
    just because you didn't love me
    anymore.

    oh what a great example and description of the feelings .. simple adn striaght to the point , explain how many of us feel ,
    i notice that you write in simple ways , too like me

    even the poem dont ryhme the traditional rhyming i enjoyed reading it

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by amber

    I love it....sorry this isn't longer.
    thanks
    ~*~Amber~*~

  • 16 years ago

    by XxBrokenInsidexX

    "funnily, i thought the sky would fall down,
    the birds would stop singing,
    the world would stop spinning,
    everyone would stop grinning.
    this planet would fall apart,
    just because you didn't love me
    anymore."

    -I loved these lines...because We really do expect all this to happen...Well its what I thought would happen...But its just what happens in our minds...

    This poem was beautifully written I could relate to it alot
    5/5

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