You left me behind. rest in peace

by Gizmo   Jun 3, 2008


I remember on your birthday,
I sat beside your crumbling headstone,
Left a note, a card, a present,
and then i left you there.
but, well its hit me since you left us,
that i don't no what to do, now.
i just got my head down and dealed with it.
If you were still here then i'd ask you what i'd do?
but your not.
i just get a bit scared every now again.

i hope i made you proud.

i was angry with you for not staying,
you threw your things away when you got more poorly,
so i guess i hated you for leaving us with nothing.
yeah i miss you, but i got nothing to remind me of you.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    Wow..this semmed so real. Like I was right there with you, feeling your pain and anger. Very vivid. i love the imagery. The style doesn't do much for me, but it doesn't take away from the poem. Keep it up. Shanik

  • 15 years ago

    by Jad

    This is a really sad poem. The context was really good. The flow and the rhyming were really good. This poem also had pretty good imagery. Once again good job.