by Gizmo Jun 3, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
I remember on your birthday, |
by Lady Nik
Wow..this semmed so real. Like I was right there with you, feeling your pain and anger. Very vivid. i love the imagery. The style doesn't do much for me, but it doesn't take away from the poem. Keep it up. Shanik |
by Jad
This is a really sad poem. The context was really good. The flow and the rhyming were really good. This poem also had pretty good imagery. Once again good job. |