Love sucks

by Tori   Jun 3, 2008


I was talking to this guy
And I thought I knew
I liked him alot
And I thought he liked me too.
Well, I was wrong,
He liked this other girl.
And I just wanted him to know,
That he crushed my whole world.
No happiness, No sound, Not even a bird,
Singing high in the sky
For it to be heard.
I wish he was here
Standing next to me
But he lives so far away,
I thought he was the key
To open the next door into my life
Without him here
How am I suppose to survive.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Mister 47

    Frist dont make a 1 block poem it si bad for the reader to read
    second dont make a poem with no rhyming it will be weak
    but tyhe rest i think theu are good and all good work

  • Damn i gotta quit that. i meant lesthat

  • Another emotional poem. great job.5/5
    **harlea

  • 16 years ago

    by Katie

    I like it.

  • 16 years ago

    by JD

    Sad poem :(
    I know exactly how you feel.