Tears under subway train

by Goodbye   Jun 3, 2008


When the tears are
pouring down my face
Standing alone in a crowd
underground full of people
different destination
same direction
You smiled
it was beautiful

I look out the window
does it matter at all
who is waiting for you here
there is no one to wipe your tears
And all you want to know
is that you're loved

Love is playing with my heart again
filling all the holes and I
just need another white paper
to write a letter to God
An angel walks by you
the walls are hard and white

all the exists are closed
you hold a knife in your pocket
ready to kill all your dreams
so none of them would be alive
because tomorrow you will be already gone

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  • 16 years ago

    by The Prince

    I love this, it's really moving, I really liked how you used and grasped the language. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    Oh my this was just heartbreaking. The ending was unexpected and truly left me breathless which was amazing. Your choice of words were flawless in expressing you emotions and conveying your message. The rhythm was great and nothing seemed out of place or forced.

    "Love is playing with my heart again"
    ^I liked how you worded that because love does play with our hearts and sometimes we win and sometimes we lose.

    Well done *5/5*

  • 16 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Great poem. Written greatly

  • 16 years ago

    by Siglawoo

    Nice 1

  • 16 years ago

    by pookiengurgi

    A little confusing in the last two paragraphs......but the reat of it is beautiful.

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