Hay that was really amazing, i went through a really rough phase with my ex and could relate to that so much.

I have been writing awhile but never had enough in me to let others see what it is i wrote so please comment ......let me know what you think

This is a good one..
i sure know how does it feels to say sorry and in return you got a mark on your body

This is a good poem, well written. i see all the comments from people talking about the marks but at the same time (though i dont agree with a man touching a female) what about the cheating? 5/5

Great work, this poem has a powerful message.
Your also right about the word sorry, it's a rare thing these days when somebody actually means it

"but he grabs he sleeve"her not he lol simple mistake i make loads like that
I really like the message your putting through here and how you did it, well written piece

This is an amazing poem!! i loved every single word, yer a great writer keep up the wonderful work!!