Broken Heart

by real eyes realize real lies   Jun 3, 2008


~What do you do when your heart turns cold and you have no one to hold.~

~You miss the old and your tired of the new. and you cant find the you, you want to be.~

~I just cant find the light in me. People don't realize what they see when they look at me.~

~They see what they want to see. Even if what they see is not in any way like the real me.~

~Inside that smile behind the laughter there's a heart hurt and torn.~

~Worn out by late night cries, bruised and cut up by lies.
How do you mend a broken heart its not so simple.~

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  • 16 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Very hearfelt write...

    "Worn out by late night cries, bruised and cut up by lies.
    How do you mend a broken heart its not so simple"

    ^^ this is beautifully sad...

    it was a good read...

    keep writing...

  • 16 years ago

    by Goth marionette

    It was good but I think it would be better if U just made it in stanzas and some rhythm would make it perfect..but I liked it anyway...so keep it up and Good luck:)..

  • 16 years ago

    by David

    "they see what they want to see" i love that line, it is so true. ur a great writer 5/5 keep it up

  • 16 years ago

    by Coldstone

    No offence but I personally think that the flow wasn't quite right.Readers tend to like poems much more if it has a good flow, I know u can do much better afterall u r an amazing writer!However the emotion was expressed very well I praise u for that and u hav really put the words to good use:)

    Keep it up:)

  • 16 years ago

    by Coldstone

    No offence but I personally think that the flow wasn't quite right.Readers tend to like poems much more if it has a good flow, I know u can do much better afterall u r an amazing writer!However the emotion was expressed very well I praise u for that and u hav really put the words to good use:)

    Keep it up:)

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