Oh my gosh, all your poems are amazing! I've become such a big fan of ur work! keep it up, hope 2 c more soon

I know how you fill people see me as the happy girl but I'm not under my smile I'm sheathing tears. But in the end it will make us stronger and will get though it. great work keep it up.

Love & God bless
Lauren

No offence but I personally think that the flow wasn't quite right.Readers tend to like poems much more if it has a good flow, I know u can do much better afterall u r an amazing writer!However the emotion was expressed very well I praise u for that and u hav really put the words to good use:)

Keep it up:)

No offence but I personally think that the flow wasn't quite right.Readers tend to like poems much more if it has a good flow, I know u can do much better afterall u r an amazing writer!However the emotion was expressed very well I praise u for that and u hav really put the words to good use:)

Keep it up:)

"they see what they want to see" i love that line, it is so true. ur a great writer 5/5 keep it up

It was good but I think it would be better if U just made it in stanzas and some rhythm would make it perfect..but I liked it anyway...so keep it up and Good luck:)..

Very hearfelt write...

"Worn out by late night cries, bruised and cut up by lies.
How do you mend a broken heart its not so simple"

^^ this is beautifully sad...

it was a good read...

keep writing...