Wow, that's so sad. The saddest part of it all is that there really are situations like that around the world that so many people are ignorant to and yet give no thought to. I truly appreciate your poem as it does give us people that moment to think about that.

I really love the blatant truth in your poem, your imagery is clear and it certainly touches the heart.

Great work.

Well this poem is really sad... Im so sorry for what you have to go through... Good job and keep writting!

That was really sad.I hate this is going on everyday with so many familys.The saddest thing is most time you cant really do anything about what is happening but to pray.Pray that he/she will be ok.And most of the time it teaches you something teaches the family something! Its hard to sit back and watch a family member lie in bed and die! Im sorry that you are going through this.But this was really good! I hate how they can be born like this and like you cant do everything you would like to do with the child.