Tell me

by needing a miracle   Jun 3, 2008


Mirror mirror on the wall
tell me who's the fairest one of them all
is it me or is it her
please tell me cause I'm not sure

mirror mirror on the wall
who's the fairest one of them all
show him so he can see
that the right one for him is me

mirror mirror on the wall
who's the fairest one of them all
show me the day
when my pain finally goes away

mirror mirror on the wall
tell me who's the fairest one of them all
is it me or is it her
please tell me cause I'm not sure

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  • 16 years ago

    by cory

    Great poem I loved the stucture,Just one thing I think you should remove the word one completly except the last line of the third stanza.And that would add to the flow some.5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Lemon Square Bear23

    Nice write i liked the repeate in it, it helped and added to the poem alot. i like how much of ur emotin u put into and let out through it. u did a very good job ur an excellent writter keep it up 5/5 always
    Kate~LSB23

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