Comments : Dying on the Inside

  • 16 years ago

    by withlove

    I really like it
    i can agree with so much of what youre saying here
    it had a lot of emotion
    and a lot of the lines were really powerful
    Don't feel bad. That would only make all of this worse.
    I want to be able to hear your name and not have my heart torn out. I want to stop thinking about you, talking about you, dreaming about you, I guess forgetting you would be helpful.
    good job
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by SilentlyDyingInside

    Wow! amazing! i no exactly how you feel and that speaks the truth!

  • 16 years ago

    by skylermay

    Wow that was sooo good....i can relate to that cuz that just happened with me and my ex......but somethings just have to end even when u don't want them to......but really good job with this poem i love it