11:11

by xDarkAngelx   Jun 3, 2008


I watch Approach the parralell lines
enamored Am I
You're way with words
Youre way with me
30 seconds...
I know how much I mean to you
I am still worthless I always shall be
15 Seconds.
Its more then infatuation
a burning fire that will not cease
5 now
I close my eyes
11:11
Be Mine
I rest with a satisfied smile.

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  • 16 years ago

    by David ODonnell

    Very interesting poem you got here, although I don't quite understand where it was going but I am intrigued and would like to hear more.

  • 16 years ago

    by withlove

    Thnx for hte comment
    i really like thetransitions and the flow of this poem
    your way with words
    your way with me
    i really liked that part
    good job
    4.5/5 =)