Comments : 11:11

  • 16 years ago

    by withlove

    Thnx for hte comment
    i really like thetransitions and the flow of this poem
    your way with words
    your way with me
    i really liked that part
    good job
    4.5/5 =)

  • 16 years ago

    by David ODonnell

    Very interesting poem you got here, although I don't quite understand where it was going but I am intrigued and would like to hear more.