Comments : Why Me?

  • 16 years ago

    by WaitAutumn

    Has a good begining, simple words but with emotion. you should proceed n_n
    go to the end of the message your trying to give

  • 16 years ago

    by Katie

    In so few words, you made this poem extremely powerful. It's awesome. I love it.
    Thanks for the comment. =]

  • 16 years ago

    by Michael Verterel

    Hah, i read this in person, well, you read it to me...
    But it was good than and its good now...

  • 16 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    "I cant breath"
    -Cant change to can't.
    -breath change to breathe.

    Short, but you get the message across really easily. I would expect more, but good job anyways .. 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by Alex

    You know i will be your savior ....love it darrling!! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by jessica

    I LOVE THIS ONE