Bang

by halie   Jun 3, 2008


She hears them yell
as she starts to cry
she sits and thinks
and wonders why

daddy use to come home on time
now he comes home late almost every night
daddy use to be so nice and sweet
now hes just so drunk and mean

in the back ground you hear mommys cries,
moans, and sighs

mommy says he turly cares,
but i just don't think so,
hes never there

3 am finally comes,
she hears the door slam
as she jumps

she walks outside,
into the hall
mommys on her hands and knees

daddy left,
she said for good

im kinda glad he never understood

we sit there as it starts to get quiet
then the door opens
one last time

as he yells he pulls a gun
mommy told me to run, run, run

where can i go? where can i hide?
mommy mommy im not leaving you behind

she screams again
as he pulls the trigger
and in a second
mommy is no longer with us

i stood so still
doesnt want to run,
her life has nothing to fufill

then you hear
"daddy, daddy shoot me please
without mommy here i no longer want to see"

"BANG"
you hear the gun
the police come in
daddy started to run,
he dropped the gun
i picked it
"BANG"
you hear it one last time
they caught daddy that day
and now here me and mommy lay
side by side for eternity

i told my mommy i wouldnt leave
i didnt want to live without mommy

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  • 16 years ago

    by Mary

    This a great poem and it is really sad, but i think that u could have changed it and made some parts bettter. im not trying to be mean i swear im just trying to help. Anyways some parts u can fix by like making it more rhymy and rhythmy in some parts. like in the beginning it was all good rhythm and stuff but at the end it was like rhyming less and stuff.

  • 16 years ago

    by angilic

    THS IS HEKA GUD