by LitxUpxWithxLife Jun 3, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
The words that drip from your mouth, are the same as all the rest. |
Wow, excellent work. The rhythm in this poem was great as well as your emotions again. They shined through very nicely. :) The flow was perfect because you stuck with your rhyming... Which was absolutely amazing. Great job!! 5/5 |