Raicism

by Bethany   Jun 4, 2008


People have different color,
even if they don't have that much dollar,
Doesn't matter if your black or white,
we all have the same right,
To drink from the same water fountain,
or even climb the same mountain,
We are all EQUAL,
Be ready for another sequel.....

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  • 16 years ago

    by Cory Mastrandrea

    You want critque, here it goes. the second line is cool, which makes the first line fine. But overall I think you can say so much more with this poem if you rethink the rhyming words. The poem is just kind of a generalized, hey, all people are people type of thing. Yeah that's cool. It's a good message, but can you say it in a unique way or say something unique about it.

  • 16 years ago

    by Robert Anthony

    Yeah it was ok, but u could of added a little bit more to it....but overall it was nice 4/5

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