Yeah it was ok, but u could of added a little bit more to it....but overall it was nice 4/5

You want critque, here it goes. the second line is cool, which makes the first line fine. But overall I think you can say so much more with this poem if you rethink the rhyming words. The poem is just kind of a generalized, hey, all people are people type of thing. Yeah that's cool. It's a good message, but can you say it in a unique way or say something unique about it.