It's not really my cup of tea. It was ok, but I didn't really see any passion or emotion in it. I mean to offend you, please don't think I am! I liked how it was a 'break up poem', however. Maybe it would be better in the love category?

Short and cute with a bice rhyme scheme. To the point
WELL DONE

Good flow
like how its like a conversation
good work

A short but sweet poem i could feel the hate. It showed annoyance as well nice poem