Comments : What a Friend's Love Can Do

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    Wow kayla. This is like...wow.

    The outcast of her entire school,
    She feels like she doesn't belong.
    Because she blinks away the tears,
    Everyone else sees her as strong.

    ^^ bleh. Relatable things...so relatable. I'm sure everyone can relate to it, but it feels horribley relatable right now.

    *hugs*
    it was great hon. I'd leave you a bigger note..but more important things are goin on.

  • 16 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Wow a descriptive and great poem, its been awhile since ive read one of yours and may i say i believe you've improved ^^