This one makes me interested.... it makes me think. lol want to look back at the things i read. yup. see if i can figure out what feelings they have lol. nice poem

This was a very different poem and I liked it a lot 5/5

This one is good. i like it.

5/5
the Raven

Hmm. i like to reminisce my old poems too. it usually is late at night for me when i write. that way nobody interupts. plus i feel like i have to hide it on my computer so nobody will see it.

anyway... that what it made me think of. good write

~Ben

This is good, i really like it :D

You started off at the beginning of the poem with rhyming, and then you switched to not rhyming randomly. That just made my mind jump. It was still a good poem.

This was the type to make the reader think and have to go back and read it again in order to get the full understanding of it.

You have a talent and I suggest you try to go somewhere in life with it.

5/5