But that didn't work for you
I guess I didn't fit in your life.
Maybe I'll fit perfectly in your arms,
just no longer than one night

Another good one and this is my favorite stanza...5/5

Awww, anuva gorgeous poem! <3
"God knows there's so much
That if I got you to listen, I'd explain."
That part especiallyy ----- The first stanza sorta doesnt have much of a flow, but the rest is gold.

5/5

xxxxx

Very nicely written poem! liked it!

To show your feeling to someone can be a very scary thing to do, because you can never be 100% sure about how someone is going to react...But if you don't, you will miss out on love for sure, so I think you did do the right thing by telling how you felt:)
I hope all turns out well for you.
Good poem:))

Take care,

5/5 Ingrid

THAT PERSON DONT DESERVE YOU!! if i am a man i will so happy that some one like u could loved me as me... as what other says "if you dont deserve at my worst you dont deserve me in my best" goodluck 5/5

THAT PERSON DONT DESERVE YOU!! if i am a man i will so happy that some one like u could loved me as me... as what other says "if you dont deserve at my worst you dont deserve me in my best" goodluck 5/5

Yoy are a great writer, surprised I haven't caught this great work before...Keep it up