I reallly liked it. Whomever this is written about must mean a great deal. 5/5

Wow. an absolutely very beautiful piece of poetry that i enjoyed to read. a brilliant flow and a fantastic rhyme.

You have given me the greatest gift in the world.
It's nothing that can be wrapped, opened, or beheld.
Out of all the presents I have received from others,
Your love is the one that my heart will always wield.
^^ ^^ ^^ ^^
a simply amazing stanza!

5/5

Keep Writing, hun
As Always,
~NinjaGirl~