I was trying to write you a love poem

by Hey Brittknee   Jun 4, 2008


I sat here all night thinking, not knowing what to say
and i have come to realize that my writing sucks okay?

I'm no good at writing love poems the words jumble in my hand
because i don't think i can explain love like running barefoot in the sand

so I'm still trying to write you a love poem bet i still sound like a fool
because I'm dorky and silly and just anything but cool

so as you're reading this pen upon paper i bet your smiling cuz you know I'm right
and probably wondering why i keep writing cuz I'm trying with all my might

since I'm so bad at writing you poems ill just get to what i wanted to say
well maybe not in this line of poetry cuz it doesn't rhyme with say

i really really like you that why I'm going to give you my heart
and if you take my heart, please don't break it, or my world will fall apart

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  • 15 years ago

    by Marissa Anne

    This is a very nice poem and loo.k u wrote something!!! its very cool!<3

  • 16 years ago

    by LoreNz0

    Hehe very good poem, lemme now hn u Do right a love poem too =)

  • 16 years ago

    by xoxkatrinaxox

    This is an interesting poem i likke it though. but giving ur heart to someone is so hard. sometimes i wish i never had

  • 16 years ago

    by silent turbulence

    Tis ones neat!!! i like!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    This is one of those poems that just real out of your mind and onto paper! I have written a few of these too! I was smiling all the way through! In a funny way, its honest oozes sincerity and so makes it a great piece to read and even better to receive!

    Michael