I Wrote You A Story Darling

by Anthony Duvalle   Jun 4, 2008


Heavy weights hang from my feet
While fatigue weighs my eyes
My mouth tastes like pills darling
My hearts forever petrified

While you say it's really not my fault
It's you who needs change
But you're the one ending this
Don't you think that's a bit strange

But now I'm just a couple words
In the back of your book
But I wrote you a novel love
About the life that you took

I wrote it before six white pills
Went quickly to my head
We've split our hearts, once one
Mine lays silenced in my bed

-Changes made to the original thanks to suggestions from "Miss Take"

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  • 16 years ago

    by Ally Cope

    Wow i love this poem
    it is so well written and i am hooked to it
    i love the last stanza
    keep it up
    looking forward to more work!

  • 16 years ago

    by blind soul

    Wow absolutely amazing!!!had so much emotion in it i love it!!! great job!!!5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by UntilWeLove

    I like this one...

  • 16 years ago

    by gracey grey

    Absolutely loved the first stanza.All in all a good write.Thumbs up!

  • 16 years ago

    by Britt

    Beautifull

    verrry cleverr </33