Neither a nightmare nor a paradise

by Ahmed Ali   Jun 4, 2008


Breathing the same life with you is like a dream
neither a nightmare nor a paradise
a still reality; a picture; a painting
yet slow moving and more vibrant than anything i've ever seen

the colors trail as both my eyes turn to fly
from everything inanimate and to everything alive
i see what's old to me but now it's all brand new
depicting a certain madness; better than what natures high can ever do

chaotic beauty is what springs to my mind
a beautiful drug to breathe, a stunning beauty to find
if this is breathing then i wonder what i would feel and do
when comes the time when i get to bite into you

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  • 16 years ago

    by Tom Swart

    May all your bites in life find no worms to mare the moment. I liked your poem and its message and the words were chosen and selected just right to make it all come together in all the right places. love can be very complicated at times.