Comments : Torment

  • 16 years ago

    by damont

    Because this person came around you started to feel different like the way you described as being hurt it seems. he is the cause of the pain. i like the poem keep writing.

  • 16 years ago

    by Bhavin

    Hello Sam,

    Welcome back. I was eagerly waiting fo your next poem. And I am more than touched to read it. I can feel its written from the bottom of the heart because I can see the honesty in the words. Carry on buddy, and relax... because you are unknown that you remain the best for me. Take care. Njoi.

    Regards,
    Bhavin

  • 16 years ago

    by she

    Once again, your flow was great
    like the before and after,
    well done

  • 16 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This one makes me sad. It also reminds me of my failed relationships

  • 15 years ago

    by Gizmo

    I think again you are talented in a way that is unusual, you have a neck for writing poems that will touch people but are lighthearted in a way nbot serious and hard writing just light.
    they carry messages which stick to you, your vocabulry is never over the top and easily understood. i loved this poem well done.