Stars above, Stars beneath

by Curing the Comon Cliche   Jun 4, 2008


With a kiss
Comes sweet relief
Intoxicating
Beyond belief

Sweet relief
It's just a kiss
Not even dreams
Can dream up this

With a kiss
Comes sweet relief
Stanza above
Stanza beneath

I like this drug
Can't OD on this
I'm addicted, Dear Reader
Sweet relief kiss
~~~
With those lips
Comes sweet relief
Stars above
Stars beneath

IK, crappy poem... sue me

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  • 16 years ago

    by she

    Nope, not a crappy poem, not at all
    jessie it was great
    i mean it

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    Pfft. Shut up. Half the girls in the world would kill to have a poem like this written for them. She will love it. I liked it. You used "intoxicating" annddddd "relief" which are some of my favorite words. ^.^ Good job, Jesse.

  • 16 years ago

    by FiguringThisOutAsIGo

    You know, maybe you should give yourself some more credit than 'IK, crappy poem' cause i thot it was really good, short and to the point, but i think thats wat made it so good....i think you did a gr8 job
    5/5