You know, maybe you should give yourself some more credit than 'IK, crappy poem' cause i thot it was really good, short and to the point, but i think thats wat made it so good....i think you did a gr8 job
5/5

Pfft. Shut up. Half the girls in the world would kill to have a poem like this written for them. She will love it. I liked it. You used "intoxicating" annddddd "relief" which are some of my favorite words. ^.^ Good job, Jesse.

Nope, not a crappy poem, not at all
jessie it was great
i mean it