While I agree that we'll never know the true meaning of love, I'll have to disagree with you when you say that we'll end up in shame if we try to figure it out. I'm in love with my fiance and I don't think I'll end up in shame. lol But I did like your poem and the message that it conveys, so good job!
5/5

Overall, I liked this piece but some of the repetitive words bothered me because that disturbed the flow on some places. Maybe you can use some synonyms for 'love' and 'solve' at the end of the piece because the repetitions became a bit overwhelming there. I don't want to offend you, this is just my opinion.
Other than that^^^ this is truly an enjoyable read. I like the concept and topic and I think that it is well written.

- It's an abstruse mystery,
That can't be solved.-
^^^
Great beginning, it pulled me into the piece and truly grabbed my attention. Powerful.

- It's one of the most impossible things to solve in ones lifetime,
It's nearly as infeasible as finding the cure for cancer or solving global warming. -
^^^
I like this part a lot, these are my favorite lines from the piece. I like the comparison, it's effective and memorable, truly refreshing and original. Greatly said.

All in all, nice piece.

Only unmade comment, last line change the "a" to "an". I agree that the longer lines can be shortened and that this will improve the write.

In ones lifetime

Seeing how one's lifetime shows that this one person has ownership over the lifetime therefore there should be an apostrophe (') in there. :)

Good job. I felt like I was solving a puzzle just by reading it. It sort of said, don't ask freaking questions, just accept it. It was nice. ^_^ Great word usage. Five out of five.

I definaltley agree with the poem. Love is so complicated, you don't just know everything. Nice Job brought across very well

I liked this poem because it grabbed me from the first line and i was instantly drawn. it was short, but had a really powerful message, yunno?? i totally agree with the message, love is so complicated, and sometimes you just have to roll with it. I also liked the complexity of it, not simple, but not so complex that you get confused. so, really good poem, 5/5 Caitlin =)

Absolutley true! i couldn't have said that better
i think you are right when you say it can't be
solved b/c there are so many different kinds
and just so different for people
amazing

Even though this is a love poem it felt very dark to me (sorry) I felt as if the "speaker" was condradicting(sp) love. As if that perso was telling me that love is unfathumable(sp) and completly unreachable. I felt a slight sting of betrayal in your work but maybe I read it wrong. It's still a good poem

What really threw me off was the dispear that I also felt (like a loss) Prehaps maybe your "speaker" had a perfect relationsip and to her it was to perfect. She started to question the love she was feeling instead of just feeling it. then she got tossed aside.

so terrible for such a lovely poem to have such an outragously sad under tone.
and way it was inspiring
5/5

Another great idea for a poem. Trying to explain why and how you feel when you're in love. You did a way better job of explaining it than i ever could. :-) My only advice would be to work on the transitions a little but otherwise this was superb. (5/5)