Remember

by HidinVictim   Jun 5, 2008


Remember you'd say,
i love you the most.
Remember you'd say,
the punishment if my eyes go astray.
Remember you'd say,
it's my life by which I'd pay.
Remember you'd say,
in your hands is were my heart lays.

So I remember these things,
and I remember them good.
See I found someone,
who loves me like you should.
And he loves me,
better than you could.

Remember I say,
your love was a hoax.
Remember I say,
your deeds
will not go unpaid.
Remember I say,
it's my heart you betrayed,
Remember I say,
I'll see you in hell one day.

I don't know were to put this... suggestions?

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  • 16 years ago

    by Mallory

    Lost love maybe? Maybe. Really good. Very descriptive. I know I say that a lot but detail means a lot for a reader. Best one I've read so far from you.