Soph, this is absolutely stunning. When poets look through their old work they actually can see how they've grown as people, and this poem shows that. I know when I look back to even a few months ago, I can see how I've grown and broken free. So it's wonderful to see that you can reflect on your own growth. You ARE a lovely butterfly, hon, so don't you ever forget that. We've both changed so much since fourth and fifth grade. We're very different people. But it's wonderful to look back and see.

The first stanza was definitely my favorite. A wonderful, strong start. ^.^

Great job, hon.

I am in touch with the problems of this world
I love that part!!!!!!!

I love this poem! It absolutely great!!!
It has great power to it!!!!!!!!
5/5

Keep up the great work!!!
<3 :)