Comments : Oh, Withering Flower

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    Flowers that wither often come back. Just winter takes them away, but in the spring they come back twice as beautiful. I honestly believe James is going to come home to us. We need him and I think that God will give him back to us...or at least I pray so. This poem was wonderful, Sophie, he'll love it when he reads it. <3

  • 16 years ago

    by Travis

    I love the rhyme flow
    im not sure who's james, but for you to show you care by writing a poem about them is special
    well done
    5/5