Hold Me In Your Arms

by CalGirl   Jun 5, 2008


Hold me in your arms,
your large, sturdy hands,
there's no other feeling like the one you get,
when you're held by your one true man.

Look me in the eyes,
look deep inside,
and you'll see that they're all teary,
from staring at you so wide.

Reach for my hands,
with your strong callous fingers.
Already, my vision gets hazy,
my speech slurs and lingers.

It's impossible to think straight,
when you talk to me like that.
I can hear you out for hours, need be,
I'll do anything do start a chat.

You are so perfect, I am not,
and yet I love you so.
It seems I cannot control,
my heart's unstoppable flow....

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  • 15 years ago

    by Lulu

    I like it its very nice
    c/b

  • 16 years ago

    by ilu

    Good job!!!..
    Let me guess, you're in the writing mood right?..
    lol
    It was very well written..
    keep writing...5/5 ^_^

  • 16 years ago

    by NoUr

    I totally felt this poem..somehow i wanna say exactly the same to my love..sweet poem..loved it..

  • 16 years ago

    by Lori

    Aww...this one is so sweet and I can tell you put alot of yourself into it. I love this poem because it shows alot of your feelings toward this person :) Great job! 895684905/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Sora

    Wow this was lovely.
    the flow was fantastic and you spoke from your heart, very nice.

    You are so perfect, I am not,
    and yet I love you so.
    It seems I cannot control,
    my heart's unstoppable flow....

    that was my favorite stanza. wonderful write. very deep. 5/5.

    -Ashlei.

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