Wow. it is a very interesting and fantastic poem and i really feel that every one of us has a lot of dreams and hallucunations in his mind.

WOW... Strong expressions!
U seem to have a lot to say in this poem... I think u can improve it by paragraphing more... It would give the poem a better structure.

```or the way my heart sings
when he passes be...
Nothing but a lie
----> When he passes BY ... :)

```I see love as something
The universe should be
I see it as result
and a reason
To everything in life
I feel like it is
The secret of life
----> I LOVE this. :)

Wow... Talk about long... :) But All in all, a very nice write. =)