It is funny.
I like it.

Thats pretty funny. I love this poem. Nice work.

Now that was too cool,
it made me feel like a kid all over again.
(and that is not easily done)
5/5

Loved it...i got a warm feeling inside because it brought me back to my childhood. 5/5

Really cute and funny. Lol. I almost miss that time when the only things you had to fear in life were monsters. :) Great writing. Honest Luck

Sarah