Comments : Your Magic

  • 16 years ago

    by Lori

    This is really good. I don't know why you didn't get more comments on this because I like it alot! Awesome job...5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Alexis

    I love this :]
    Its beautiful..

  • 16 years ago

    by A Phoenyx in Flight

    WOW this poem is Beautiful It is my new favorite poem on this website.

    Ilove it

  • 16 years ago

    by Sora

    A wonderfully expressed poem. i was intrigued with every word. great write!

  • 16 years ago

    by Savannah Kate

    AMAZING job. i loved it! keep up the great work. id love it if you read suma mine! :)

  • 15 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Wow! I love this poem. It's so beautifully written. I love how you compared the woman making the man fall in love with her as magic. That's a common comparison and it actually is almost like magic sometimes! Great job!

  • 12 years ago

    by Larry Chamberlin

    Posted January 2008 (5 months earlier) at

    http://www.gaiaonline.com/journal/?mode=view&u=5111854