by Lori
This is really good. I don't know why you didn't get more comments on this because I like it alot! Awesome job...5/5 |
by Alexis
I love this :] |
WOW this poem is Beautiful It is my new favorite poem on this website. |
by Sora
A wonderfully expressed poem. i was intrigued with every word. great write! |
AMAZING job. i loved it! keep up the great work. id love it if you read suma mine! :) |
Wow! I love this poem. It's so beautifully written. I love how you compared the woman making the man fall in love with her as magic. That's a common comparison and it actually is almost like magic sometimes! Great job! |
Posted January 2008 (5 months earlier) at |