He walked away

by real eyes realize real lies   Jun 5, 2008


I woke up today and my day remained the same as yesterday. My days are stressful and composed of colors blue and Grey.
My hair's falling out and sooner or later I think I'm going to go bald. I don't want to admit what it is that makes me stress the way i do.

but if you must know the truth ill be honest its you.
I miss your smile and your touch, I miss the way my world revolved around us.
You made so many promises for me, you , and us and I believed you. You said you would never hurt me, break my heart you would never do.

So i trusted what you said and fell in love with you.
Now my parents took you away from me, together they said we could never be.
So you walked away from me, my heart you took along with you.
friends you said we would always stay.

But how could i forgive you when you took your love away.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Ash

    Simply amazing poem. So much of feelings and emotions flowing through this one.
    I love the way you started this one and: "I woke up today and my day remained the same as yesterday. My days are stressful and composed of colors blue and Grey." - my favourite part of this poem.

    Keep up the good work! 5/5 from me

  • 16 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    You need to pay attention to capitolization.. thats one of things you don't do very well. I almost feel like I'm reading a paragraph as well, it's kind of all bunched together and not in stanzas. It's kinda of a mess. however, the message of this poem was good and I could see where you are coming from in this situation that you are in. Great work. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by BreakMyWingsAndRun

    This is very good!
    i can really relate.
    very good! keep it up.
    5/5!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Bare My Paradox

    This is beautiful...its very true...i love it...by the way...this is the first time i'm letting people see my poems as well ! i really like yours....please keep it up ! its wonderful ...

    take care
    ~IsHa~

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