This is beautiful...its very true...i love it...by the way...this is the first time i'm letting people see my poems as well ! i really like yours....please keep it up ! its wonderful ...

take care
~IsHa~

This is very good!
i can really relate.
very good! keep it up.
5/5!!

You need to pay attention to capitolization.. thats one of things you don't do very well. I almost feel like I'm reading a paragraph as well, it's kind of all bunched together and not in stanzas. It's kinda of a mess. however, the message of this poem was good and I could see where you are coming from in this situation that you are in. Great work. 5/5

Simply amazing poem. So much of feelings and emotions flowing through this one.
I love the way you started this one and: "I woke up today and my day remained the same as yesterday. My days are stressful and composed of colors blue and Grey." - my favourite part of this poem.

Keep up the good work! 5/5 from me